Y13 baseline assessment learner response
1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential). WWW: Q2 is superb: such brilliant use of the CSP pages and excellent focus on the question throughout. Close to a top level response. The challenge now is reaching that level in every question. EBI: The big lesson here is Q1: unseen. You need to revise semiotics (particularly myth and ideology) but also think about your approach to these questions and your focus on the key words. - In Q2 I'm sure timing was an issue at the end but perhaps a paragraph on diversification (GQ-online, GW- events) could have added a little more to the essay. 2) Focusing on the unseen question 1, pick out three bullet points on the anticipated content and link each point to the three aspects of the question - denotation, connotation, myth. -The construction of myth through the use of signs – the lone, charismatic American hero, violent but thoughtful and reflective. -The connot